22 Kasım 2011 Salı

REWRITING OF PARAGRAPH

1.Our beagles loves to hunt so somebody opens the back door for her.She barrels down porch steps into the yard then she runs back and forth across the lawn in relief.And her nose cruises the wet grass for smells.These are smells of which cats,rabbit smells, and other presences too subtle for human detection.She sniffs and she spins her tail in quick circles.Firstly it spins clockwise then it spins counterclockwise.These two activities always occur together.They are sniffing and spinning.They seem to propel her along.

2.The Government Printing Office in Washington D.C., is a source of much useful information but few people know about it which is the official publishing house for the federal governement.The GPO publishes pamphelets and books on a vast number of subjects which range from the dangers of X-rays from home TV sets to the identification of mushrooms.Approximately 27.000 publications are offered through the Superintendent of Documents.Many of them are inexpensive.There is no charge at all for some of them

3.A man whose name is John Jacob Astor reaped America's first fortune.He was a German immigrant who was lowborn and uneducated so he never learned to speak English properly..He made his initial money trading Indian furs.He carried on his business to the end in an accent which was redolent of the Hamburg gutters.

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